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Band 6+: you give advice to your friend who is seeking work. write a letter advising your friend about a job. tell your friend which job it is and explain why you think it is suitable job. advise your friend about application process

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Dear sarah,

I hope you are having a great week. I am writing to tell you about the vacancy for secondary school teacher at Muscat. I know you have been seeking new career opportunity lately and i think this job is absolutely perfect for you.

As you have been teaching in various CBSE effiliated schools in India for four years, you have good command over your language and assume beautiful classroom management skill. I became aware of your progress when i first saw you teaching during my class observation period. Moreover, your punctuality and creative thinking expertise will be effective to achieve this post.

However, tailor you CV using Google Chrome in ‘Rx resumes’, Which consists of number of layouts of various resumes based on different proffessions. Eventually, This tab doesn’t freeze the page of cached data. If file size is too large to upload, use small pdf to compress your document.

Let me know what you think about it, and we can look over your resume, once we meet together on the next weekend. I am confident you will nail this.

Yours faithfully,

Asifa

Word Count: 185

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant information about the job, suitability, and application process. The advice is clear and generally well-organized. To further improve, consider elaborating slightly more on the application process itself, perhaps mentioning specific documents required or deadlines, if known. Also, ensure consistent and accurate grammar and spelling throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is mostly adequate, but consider breaking up longer paragraphs for better readability. The advice on the application process feels somewhat disjointed from the rest of the letter; try to integrate it more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For example, instead of 'good command over your language,' you could say 'excellent communication skills.' Consider using synonyms to enhance the letter's lexical richness.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'CBSE effiliated schools' should be 'CBSE-affiliated schools,' and 'assume beautiful classroom management skill' should be 'possess excellent classroom management skills.' Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully before submitting will help improve accuracy.

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Band 6+: you give advice to your friend who is seeking work. write a letter advising your friend about a job. tell your friend which job it is and explain why you think it is suitable job. advise your friend about application process

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