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Band 4+: you give advice to your friend who is seeking work. write a letter advising your friend about a job. tell your friend which job it is and explain why you think it is suitable job. advise your friend about application process

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Hello Dear Ahmet

I coming to subject. But firstly how are you? What are you doing, man? I hope you are good. How are your family. I hope they are good, too.

Let’s get to the subject. I want to give you some advice about finding a job. You can use Linkedin to find job. Even should use Linkedin for finding job. Unfourtenatly, I don’t love it but it is the most popular application for jobs. You have not to make a post. However, you should fill out Linkedin’s biography. Also, you can look newspaper, television, Google’s sites and some social media pages. Even you can ask some offices for available job. Well, how to prepare for a job interview? Firstly, you should be sure to your résumé. You should control your résumé. Then, you should practice with your friends, your relatives or ChatGPT, Gemini for the interview. You should get information about the job. You can look websites. You should prepare clean formal clothes. You should be sure from your. You can write text for speaking in interview. Well, how to prepare for a job interview? İf you can go to the office last 30 minutes, it is good for you. You should be relax and your sure. You should explain good yourself. You should speak your experience and your skills. You shouldn’t speak long. You should be confidence. İf you can use this advices, you have to sent money. I’m sure you will be successful.

So, nothing is imposible. You can do it. Trust yourself. I’m waiting your turn back. Also, you should come this. See you later.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

should: 13

prepare: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by providing advice on finding jobs, preparing for interviews, and suggesting do's and don'ts during the interview. However, there are some inaccuracies and irrelevant details (e.g., 'you have to sent money' is unclear and inappropriate). The response is generally on topic but lacks clarity and organization in places. To improve, focus on structuring the letter with clear paragraphs for each bullet point, use more precise and formal language, and ensure all advice is relevant and accurate. Additionally, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance overall coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure with clear paragraphs for each part of the task, but the flow is often disrupted by abrupt transitions and informal digressions (e.g., 'I coming to subject. But firstly how are you?'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and smoother transitions between ideas, and avoid unnecessary asides that distract from the main purpose.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'Unfourtenatly', 'you have to sent money', 'you should come this'). There is some attempt to use job-related terms (e.g., 'Linkedin', 'résumé', 'interview'), but the range is limited. To improve, expand your vocabulary with more precise and formal words, and ensure correct spelling and collocations (e.g., 'update your profile', 'research the company'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout, including incorrect verb forms ('I coming', 'you have to sent'), missing articles, and punctuation issues. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with frequent errors in tense and agreement. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures, review basic grammar rules (e.g., subject-verb agreement, verb tenses), and proofread your writing to correct errors.

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