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Band 4+: You have been working abroad for several months but now need to return to your country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you need to leave describe what you enjoyed about your job tell him/her when you will leave

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I regret to inform you that I am unable to continue working as a member in your company as I must return to my home country due to some family issues. I remember last year my father was suffering from cardiac problem. My family very upset because my youngest brother do acdeamic study .the famous hospital cardio nova treated my father,I am shocked because my father had one attack .doctor said that condition was not good his father had a heart valve is blocked,they said do the operation but my father was not willing.

Further more , know two days ago my mother called me she said condition his father again heart stoke was came .doctor said immediately did the operation so you come back to home .

I am working last several months in this company.this company provided a lots of benefits and opportunities,so please consider my problems and my condition .

Your faithfully ,

Abc

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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condition: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the family emergency could be clearer and more concise. The positive aspects of the job are mentioned but could be more detailed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of more precise and sophisticated words would improve the overall quality. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Focusing on grammar accuracy is crucial for improvement.

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