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Band 8+: You have moved into a new house and want to invite a former colleague to a housewarming party. Write a letter to your former colleague. In your letter: - explain why you have moved - give them some details about your new home - provide information about the party (date, time, and location)

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Dear Maha,

I hope you’re doing great. I’m moving to a new apartment closer to my new job. I’m planning to throw a housewarming gathering, and I’d love it if you could come.

I intend to invite the whole gang so we can hang out together and catch up on the latest updates. The reason I am rushing the hosting is so Sara can spend some good time and have a girls’ night to help her get over the tragic accident she just had.

The party is going to be at my place on King Abdullah St., next to the old cinema building, on the 4th floor, house no. 13. The gathering will be on Tuesday, Apr. 20, at 4 pm; please arrive on time so we can make the most out of the evening. Don’t forget to text me to let me know if you’re coming.

PS: If you don’t find parking at the main entrance, turn right and there will be extra spaces right there.

Can’t wait to see you,

Layan

Word Count: 173

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Overall Band Score

8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. The reason for the party is clearly stated, the logistical details (date, time, and location) are provided comprehensively, and the instructions regarding RSVP and parking are included naturally. The tone is appropriate for a former colleague with whom the writer seems to have a friendly relationship. No improvements are necessary as the requirements are satisfied with ease.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is exceptionally well-organized. The transition from the purpose of the party to the logistical details and finally to the practical instructions (parking) flows naturally. Paragraphing is used effectively to separate different ideas, making the message effortless to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is natural, appropriate for an informal letter to a former colleague, and shows great flexibility. Phrases like 'throw a housewarming gathering,' 'catch up on the latest updates,' and 'make the most out of the evening' demonstrate a sophisticated command of idiomatic English. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical control is excellent. You have used a variety of structures, including complex sentences and different tenses, with full accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly to guide the reader through the details of the address and timing.

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Band 8+: You have moved into a new house and want to invite a former colleague to a housewarming party. Write a letter to your former colleague. In your letter: - explain why you have moved - give them some details about your new home - provide information about the party (date, time, and location)

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