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Band 5+: you have recentaly watched a new programme on t.v. you like the programme but have just discovered that the t.v has moved it to a later time, when you are unable to watch it write a letter to the t.v in your letter 1 discribe why you like the programme 2 explain why you believe it should not be on later time 3 say what action you would like the t.v station to take you should write at least 150 words. start your letter as follows

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dear sir.

i want to tell you that your t.v programme about moral values are very famous in our family. we like this programmme very much . we really enjoy the talk of scholar .

this programme also contain every day science . that have a souite able knowledge for every one. it was on aired on 8 pm monday to friday .

but last night suddenly i saw that programme was running on 11 pm, 10 pm is our sleeping time , because we have to get early in morniing for office and also children for schooo.

so i want to request that plz change the time of the programme . i think that is a fine programme for us . it is not a waste of time . so plz try to run it around 7pm to 9 pm.

your faithfuly

mr. smith

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

programme: 5

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The reasons for liking the program and objections to the time change are clearly stated. A specific request for action is made. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could elevate the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally understandable. However, some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing create minor disruptions in the flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but the range is somewhat limited. More varied and precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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