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Band 5+: You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Dear Ahmad,

I hope this letter finds you well. I have good new for you we bought a new house in your town.

Last week as i tell you we plan to buy new house because of my scool is to far from my house so we buy new house as surprise its in your town and also near to your home, our new home is front for lake park and house no is 23.

As you know that all tha town is to peacefull, butt my neighbour is sach a nice. When we shift our all furneture they help us to move it in house and invite us on lunch, in front of my home have park and my school is also near to my home, also you know that a new supper market is also this side,

I would request that you can come to my home with your family and see our new house. We can ear dinner togather and after that we play in park.

Your Sincerly,

Azmat

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

house: 7

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, providing a description of the house, neighborhood, and an invitation. However, some aspects could be more detailed and descriptive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and informal style affect the overall flow and coherence. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would improve the letter's overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that impact clarity and understanding. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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