Letter

Band 6+: You have recently moved to a new country and are writing a letter to a friend back home. Write a letter to your friend describing your new life in the country. You should include details about: - what you like about the new country - the challenges you have faced adjusting to a different culture - your plans for the future while living there.

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Hey Bobby,

I recently moved to China to pursue my career as a Civil Engineer and took Bachelor’s degree at a university in ShangHai and I am really excited to share this to you. What I really love about this country is that they are so advanced in technology and everything here is much cheaper than we had in our hometown.

However, everywhere I go here is always crowded and all of the people are so used to being nimble and aggresive. The first time I arrived here, I couldn’t even stand a chance in the MRT station.

I really hope we can meet again somewhere in the future, I want to explore China more with you along with their culture and nature. I can’t wait for your response and I hope you feel the same way too.

From your Buddy, Russell

Word Count: 142

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

really: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by describing aspects of life in China, including positive aspects, challenges, and future plans. However, the development of each point could be stronger with more specific details and examples. To improve, elaborate further on each point to provide a richer and more comprehensive picture of your experiences. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of the points mentioned in the task (what you like, challenges, and future plans) to enhance clarity. The transition between describing the positive aspects and the challenges could be smoother. For example, you could use phrases like "On the other hand" or "Despite these advantages" to signal a shift in topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to incorporate more descriptive and varied language to make the letter more engaging. For instance, instead of just saying "advanced in technology," you could provide specific examples or use more vivid adjectives. Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., instead of using 'really' multiple times).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, the first sentence is a bit convoluted and contains errors. It could be revised for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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