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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new neighborhood and would like join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I trust this letter finds you well. I am writing to request you about sport club which I keen on Jack’s Sports Club. Last week I relocated to this neighborhood. I accustomed to join sport club in my old town. Thus, I found a new sport club which is near my new flat. I hope that this club has all facilities as I expected. Moreover, I want to join it for just my health and to keep my strong muscles. If possible, I can join variety of competitions, especially basketball. The lite of I am obviously good at from basketball. Althought, this club is private. I hope this is the same as yours. Furthermore, I am sure that I will get on well with my new collaborators and friends. I kindly request information regarding the membership process. If you want to know some information about me, I can inform you for remote assistance. You should just contact me with my number 1234567. Thank you for your attention to this letter and look forward to a swift resolution.

Best regards,

Lily Smith

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sport: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the purpose of joining the sports club and requesting information. However, it could be improved by more directly stating the specific information needed regarding membership.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some unclear connections between ideas and grammatical errors. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but there's room for improvement in word choice and precision. More sophisticated and accurate vocabulary would enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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