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Band 5+: You just finished a short course on photography and want to share your experience with a close friend. Write a letter to your friend explaining: - what motivated you to take the photography course - what you learned and your favorite part of the course - how you plan to use your new skills in the future.

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Dear Anggih

Hello Anggih, I hope you doing well. Last month I have been finished o short course on photography at “eye.eye photos” and this latter i want share your experience when i join that course.

Personally, I realy enjoy doing My new hobby because you know I am outdoor enthusiast and when I go to mountain, i do not using camera for take good photo and that why my motivated take course. There I learn use camera like setting ISO, editiing photo, and my favorite part in the class is editing photo because i would setting color the photo and I happy editing monochrome for me it is very hard. and might on month i will take english course because I have dream i want do treveling from country to country, i have dream go to liverpool and there I will stroling around and take some photo historical building and I will visit the beatles museum.

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
photo: 5
course: 3
because: 3
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Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task, but there are some areas for improvement. The content is somewhat relevant, but it includes some irrelevant information (mentioning the English course and travel plans). To improve, focus on directly addressing each bullet point in the task instructions with clear and relevant details. Ensure the language is accurate and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, clearly separate the motivation, learning experience, and future plans into distinct paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more precise and varied word choices. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'take photo,' explore alternatives like 'capture images' or 'photograph.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
Grammar and sentence structure need significant improvement. There are noticeable errors in verb tense, sentence formation, and punctuation that affect clarity. Focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences and proofreading carefully to minimize errors. For example, 'I have been finished' should be 'I finished,' and 'that why my motivated take course' needs restructuring.

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