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Band 4+: You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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Dear Ms. Snyder

I am writing in regarded to my obsence from the annual company to take some time off of work to go holiday with my family at malino’s park.

First of all, I would like to formally apologize for cannot come to work in the 12-14 june, because I have crucial time with my family. Actually, I am only prepare this holiday for my family cause my grandma birthday, so all her child must be came to party for communication conection ( in my country said silaturahmi).

In order to catch up on what all my job ia mia, i already give mywork to back up with mia and mia aggre with that

Thank you for understanding

Aswin

Word Count: 120

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

4.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation could be more detailed and professional. The request is clear, but the justification lacks clarity and sophistication. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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