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Band 4+: You received a letter from a freind asking for your advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job

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Dear Swati,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to let you know that you should opt for professional opportunity rather than attending the college.

The reason behind not choosing the school is that it may quite expensive. Moreover, course that you want to go is theoretical, which may challenge your practical skills.

Being employed by someone is the better option as you can learn on hand which will improve your artistic skills. Furthermore you can earn income while learning new things.

I would recommend you to search for various positions such as cosmic artists , landscape artists since i know are crazy of life skills. Apart from this , you love the whole year with your improved skills.

I hope this information let you know about good opportunity for you and i am waiting to hear from you

Your sincerely,

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task, but the writer could have provided more detailed and specific advice to the friend. Additionally, the writer could have considered both options (college and job) and weighed their pros and cons. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The writer jumps abruptly from discussing the drawbacks of college to recommending specific job positions. The writer could have used more cohesive devices to link their ideas together.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses some basic vocabulary, but there is a lack of precision and nuance. The writer could have used more sophisticated vocabulary to express their ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer demonstrates a limited range of sentence structures and grammatical forms. There are some errors in punctuation, verb tense, and subject-verb agreement. The writer could have used more complex sentence structures and paid closer attention to grammatical accuracy.

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