Band 4+: You recently attended a community event that was poorly organized and disappointing. Write a letter to the local council expressing your concerns. You should include: - a description of the event and your expectations - specific examples of what went wrong - suggestions for improving future events.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to exspress my dissatisfaction about recent fundraising event you organised which is the Grand Charity Event 2026 about 2 days ago

The event was susscesfull however there are quite a lot of incidents you may not nocite, firstly is wet ground in the front of the gate, its quite dirty also uncomfortable for people who step on it, especially for children they are playing or run as a result the wet groud splased everywhere. Secondly the public toilet also quite dirty and stink in addition several public toilet has no water in it. The last one is about the security, there are so many security however they didn’t work completely on the contrary they are just stand up straight.

I hope this letter can make you improve your service also pay attention to cleanliness. I suggest for add more janitor instaed of deploy some security

Your faithfully

Nanas