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Band 5+: You recently attended a cultural event in your city and would like to share your thoughts with a friend. Write an email to your friend describing the event. You should include details about: - the type of cultural event you attended - your experience and what you enjoyed the most - why you think they should attend this event next time.

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Hi Mike,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to let you know of a festival of light that I attended at the Hagley Park. As the exhibition was meant for night, I started at 7P.M. I entered the exhibition from the south enterance and it turned out be the ideal location; as the queue for ticket was shorter. From the start, the light displays were amanzing, with dozens of articulating light fixtures lining the first 100 meters. After that comes the motion detected lazer projectors projecting flowers on the ground and beside that there were area for kids, where lights were reaching to fixtures the kids were touching. Next couple hundread meters were fixed lights but there were lighting the pathway is such a way that made the walk pleasent. Other intresting exhibit was the drum that activated the lights, at the end of the exhibit. it had a long queue, but the wait was worth it.

The visit was well worth for the enterance fee of 10$ I paid for it. The exhibhition is on for five more days, I recommend you and Meghan visit it.

Thanks and Regards,

Vivek Jayachandran

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

light: 3

lights: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the event is clear and engaging. Minor improvements in structuring the response would enhance the overall impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's message is mostly easy to follow. However, some improvements in sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance the flow and readability. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some minor lexical inaccuracies are present. More precise word choices would improve the overall sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter attempts to use a range of grammatical structures, there are several errors that affect the clarity and accuracy. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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