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Band 6+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to you to share my comments about the Risk Management Course that I attended last week.

Last week, our Human Resources Manager selected me to go for Risk Management Course at Singapore Building Academy. Because most of the time, I need to prepare a risk assessment form for our clients and new projects, and thus, this training polished my original skills. Indeed, this class was very beneficial for me because I got to learn so many new risks related to our construction project that I did not know previously. In addition, they also shared the details protection plan before any risk occurred. Besides, people from different organizations and companies tended. So that I got an opportunity to listen to their problem-solving skills and experiences. That is why this training is essential for the person who is working on engineering projects.

However, I would like to highlight that this training involves physical activities such as showing how to make proper barriers and going to a construction site to check scaffolding. That is why people from our office who are not physically fit should not attend this training.

Lastly, I would like to say thanks to you and our HR manager Ms. Holly for giving me a chance to attend this valuable class.

Yours Sincerely,

Ivy

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses the task by reminding the employer about the Risk Management Course, explaining its usefulness in the writer's work, and suggesting why it may not be suitable for some colleagues. However, there are some lapses in content, such as the lack of specific details about the course and its content.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The message is generally coherent and can be followed, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The organization of ideas could be improved for better clarity and coherence. Additionally, there are some lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing the course and the suggestion about its suitability for colleagues.

Lexical Resource

6

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and lack of precision are evident. The writer should aim for more natural and sophisticated control of lexical features. Additionally, the use of vocabulary could be more varied and appropriate to the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While a range of structures is attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the letter. Punctuation and grammar need improvement for better accuracy and clarity. The writer should focus on using appropriate punctuation and grammar consistently.

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