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Band 6+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to give my feedback as per the provision of the training course that you had recommended last month. I had successfully completed Advanced Marketing course last Monday.

Firstly, this course had taught numerous improved strategies, marketing gimmicks, and advertising schemes which basic marketing course was unable to offer us. It is extremely detailed yet easy to comprehend lessons. Although it contained only twenty chapters, each was worth spending time.

Moreover, the analytical approach I learned from it will surely enable us to understand the loophole of our old marketing scheme and boost our sales in next financial year. The technical know-how will definitely plummet out losses.

Although it helped me a lot, I am afraid it will be of any value to our human resources team. Since they do not deal with product sales, they might have no use of this training course.

I hope a quick consideration to my recommendation.

Yours Sincerely

Sarwat Fatima

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

marketing: 4

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by reminding the employer about the training course and explaining why it was useful. However, the explanation about why the course may not be suitable for some colleagues is not fully developed. It would be beneficial to provide more specific reasons why the course may not be suitable for the human resources team.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The flow of ideas could be improved for better coherence. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices and paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to enhance the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is fairly varied, but there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings. It would be beneficial to use more precise and natural language. Additionally, there is potential to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There is evidence of a range of grammatical structures, but there are also noticeable errors in punctuation and grammar. It would be beneficial to pay closer attention to the accuracy of grammar and punctuation to improve overall grammatical range and accuracy.

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