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Band 5+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to give some overview of my recent training course. As you know, I was attending a training course regarding advance uses of Excel for the project management.

Let me give you some insights about the course. It was basically a month long beginner to advance level course that gives the details about how the software works. I think this course will be extremally helpful in my day to day work as our company uses Excel for most of our accounting and project management related stuff. Also, It covers all the aspects of the software with in such short period of time.

I would also like to suggest this course to other staff in my department. As it will not only enhance their knowledge and expertise in Excel but also boost the productivity of the company.

I look forward to know your opinion in this manner and hearing from you.

Kind regards,

Jay.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

excel: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by reminding the employer about the course and explaining why it was useful. However, the explanation about why the course may not be suitable for some colleagues is missing. It would be beneficial to include this information to fully address the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence and cohesion, such as the abrupt ending of the letter. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better organization of ideas.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is fairly varied, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. Consider using a wider range of vocabulary and more precise language to enhance lexical resource. Additionally, the use of 'extremally' should be corrected to 'extremely'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures used, but there are some grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. It would be beneficial to review and revise the grammar and punctuation for better accuracy.

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