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Band 5+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter with regard to respond you for your question on giving my feedback regarding a training course that I joined last week.

The course lasted for 2 days; the trainer shared his knowledge and experience relating public speaking and each trainee had to present based on scenarios and he gave us feedbacks.

It was a short training and meaningful to me for my career. Honestly, I was fairly good at giving presentation, however, the training encouraged me to be more confident. I could pay attention to the audiences while I am clarifying a statement.

I am currently working as a junior level staff; this course is suitable for all entry level positions. I would not recommend that it is for mid-level management positions such as seniors, superiors and managers who already own leadership and better presentation skill.

Thank you for giving me a chance to join this course and your support.

Yours sincerely,

Laura James

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

giving: 3

training: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the main points of the task by reminding the employer about the course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it may not be suitable for some colleagues. However, there are some minor deviations from the task requirements, such as not clearly stating why the course was useful in the work context and not providing specific reasons why it may not be suitable for certain colleagues.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive. Ideas are presented logically, and there is a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, there are some issues with paragraphing, and some sentences could be more effectively linked to improve overall cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter, and some words and phrases are used accurately. However, there are instances of awkward phrasing and inaccuracies that slightly affect the overall lexical resource score. To improve, focus on using more precise and natural language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While there are some grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes, they do not significantly hinder understanding. To enhance grammatical accuracy, pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and punctuation usage.

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