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Band 5+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to you to share my comments about the Risk Management Course that I attended last week.

Last week, our Human Resources Manager selected me to go for Risk Management Course at Singapore Building Academy. Because most of the time, I need to prepare a risk assessment form for our clients and new projects, and thus, this training polished my original skills. Indeed, this class was very beneficial for me because I got to learn so many new risks related to our construction project that I did not know previously. In addition, they also shared the details protection plan before any risk occurred. Besides, people from different organizations and companies tended. So that I got an opportunity to listen to their problem-solving skills and experiences. That is why this training is essential for the person who is working on engineering projects.

However, I would like to highlight that this training involves physical activities such as showing how to make proper barriers and going to a construction site to check scaffolding. That is why people from our office who are not physically fit should not attend this training.

Lastly, I would like to say thanks to you and our HR manager Ms. Holly for giving me a chance to attend this valuable class.

Yours Sincerely,

Ivy

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6

The letter addresses the task by reminding the employer about the Risk Management Course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it may not be suitable for some colleagues. However, the explanation could be more detailed and specific to fully address each point of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The flow of ideas could be improved by organizing the content into more structured paragraphs. Additionally, some sentences are unclear and need to be revised for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive, and there are instances of awkward phrasing. Try to vary your vocabulary more and use more precise language to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect verb tenses, and punctuation errors. Proofreading for these mistakes is essential to improve grammatical accuracy.

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