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Band 4+: You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter • remind your employer what the course was about • explain why the course was useful to you in your work • suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other Colleagues

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to provide you a feedback of the training course which I had done. Thank you for sending me in Healthcare management course and this opportunity to increase my professional skills and I would be hopeful to use it on my work place.

I personally believe this course will be a good change in our healthcare services and I can do different task very easily and effectively. It’s make a huge difference in our healthcare facilities.

Furthermore It’s is a good opportunity for all health Care professionals but I think so it’s not suitable for class 4 staff. I am very happy to received this training and I would hopeful to give this types of training in future.

Thank you

Your Faithfully

Anny

Word Count: 129

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

training: 3

course: 3

healthcare: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by reminding the employer about the healthcare management course attended, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it may not be suitable for some colleagues. However, more details and specific examples could have been provided to fully address the task. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The flow of ideas could be improved by using linking words and maintaining a more logical sequence of information. Additionally, the letter lacks proper paragraphing.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More sophisticated and accurate vocabulary related to healthcare management could enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, there are some grammatical errors that affect the overall lexical quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Punctuation errors and issues with subject-verb agreement impact the overall accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and punctuation is recommended.

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