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Band 5+: You recently attended an exciting event and want to share your experience with a close friend. Write a letter to your friend describing the event. You should include details about: - what the event was and where it took place - the highlights and memorable moments you experienced - how you felt during the event and what you took away from it.

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Hi , Sara! I hope you’re doing well! I just want to write you about an amazing festival i went last week

It was a cheese festival. It took place in the central park of my city far from my house . I

I was very excited to go there because I love cheese and this festival gave me the opportunity to try different types of cheese from different countries and products.

The festival started at 1PM at lastet until 6 PM

At the festival there were different types of cheese from cheddar to parmesan, there was a pleasant cheese smell everywhere, I tried many different cheeses, but my favorite was Gouda cheese from Canadian products. I was really enjoying of the cheese sculpting moments . Can you imagine that someone carved a life-sized cat out of parmesan? I was honestly amazed. There was also live music, cooking demos, and even a cheese-eating competition . I felt so happy and relaxed all day. We have to go together next year!

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cheese: 7

festival: 5

there: 4

different: 4

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail on the event, highlights, and personal feelings. Minor improvements in structure and detail could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences lack logical flow and proper connections. Improving sentence structure and using cohesive devices would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices could add sophistication and impact. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure is crucial for a higher score.

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