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Band 7+: You recently borrowed a book from a friend, and unfortunately, you lost it. Write a letter to your friend. You should include: -an apology for losing the book -details about how you lost it -an offer to replace it or compensate them

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Dear diana,

How are you doing? How are classes going? I hope your last semester results came out brilliant. I am writing this letter to apologise for misplacing the biology textbook you recently gave me.

I was very excited you agreed to lend the book to me so i took it to my cousin’s apartment. I left it on the dinning table and we stepped out to grab lunch at chicken republic. The restaurant was so close to my house, so after eating i decided to go home. The textbook escaped my memory for two days, and when i eventually recalled, i took a straight bus back to my cousin house. On reaching there, we searched every part of the house but the book was nowhere to be found.

I am truly sorry and completely regret this unfortunate incident. Kindly send me the amount it costs to purchase the book and your bank details for reimbursements. I also wish to send you my red hair scarf that you admire so much to compensate for the loss.

I miss you so much and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Love,

Emmie.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, including a clear apology, a detailed explanation of the circumstances, and a thoughtful suggestion for compensation. The tone is appropriate and the language is natural and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The sequence of events is clear, and the apology is appropriately placed. To improve coherence, consider using more varied linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. For instance, instead of simply stating events, you could add phrases that show cause and effect or contrast. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and generally appropriate for the task. Words like 'misplacing,' 'unfortunate incident,' and 'reimbursements' are well-chosen. To enhance lexical resource, try incorporating a wider range of synonyms and idiomatic expressions. For example, instead of 'stepped out to grab lunch,' you could use 'went out for a quick bite.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary is consistently accurate and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'The textbook escaped my memory for two days' could be rephrased for better clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of prepositions. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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