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Band 4+: You recently got a job offer a letter from another country and you will write a letter to your friend 1. Give the details about the job. 2. ⁠ why did you apply for this job? 3. ⁠ ask her some questions and suggestions about the country

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Dear Raj,

I hope you are doing well!. I am writing this letter to inform you as I got a new job opportunity where you live in the city and I want to know about the current job culture and local communities at your place.

To begin with, I got selected as a role for the project lead in an multi national company for a permanent position. And I am pleased with this opportunity in terms of salary and new responsibilities. So, I would want accept this opportunity. Additionally, it would definitely boost me better life in future to myself and family in all aspects.

To continuation, one of my project mate has been moved to your current country and I had a friendly chat with him about the work and their culture. I was impressed the way he expressed about the over all environment. And I am also looking similar kind of environment for my carrier. Therefore, I have applied multiple companies to find the job at your place.

Last but not least, could you please let me know how local transport would suit for daily commute. And please suggest me any better neighbourhood to live for long term, basically I am looking for place where it should have better school for my children and near to my office.

I am waiting for your warm response.

Yours love,

Vishnu.

Word Count: 230

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

opportunity: 3

about: 3

would: 3

better: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6

The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing details about the job, reasons for applying, and questions for the friend. However, the development of some points could be stronger to fully satisfy the prompt.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's organization is generally clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, and the use of cohesive devices is not always effective, leading to some choppiness.

Lexical Resource

4

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there is limited range and some inaccuracy. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede understanding. Accuracy needs significant improvement.

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