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Band 5+: You recently missed a flight. You think this was the fault of the airlines. Write a letter to the airlines. In your letter - Explain why you believe the airlines was at fault - Describe the impact of this had on your journey - Say what you want the airlines to do.

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I am writing to draw your immediate attentions towards the issue where i missed a flight due to the neglegience of your airline staff .

Last month , i booked a flight with your airline my boarding number was AS32b9. since i reached airport 2 hours before, receptinist told me flight was deleayed for 3 hours due to weather conditions. I was told to wait in sitting zone where she will be informed me about boarding.

To my surprise, after spending 3 hours in sitting zone i asked about flight. Then crew member shoutedon me about late coming. I explained about situation in front of him. Despite knowing the truth, he told me to take next flight on my own cost.

It was disheartning situation for me ,as i had important business meeting. Thefore i had to book another flightby bearing additional cost.

It is clearly airline fault. i request you to return my first flight money and arrange further assistance with me.

Yours faithfully,

Roseline mart.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

flight: 6

about: 4

airline: 3

hours: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The explanation of the airline's fault, the impact on the journey, and the desired resolution are all present. However, some aspects could be more clearly explained for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices and precise language would improve the overall impact and professionalism of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impede understanding and impact the overall score. A thorough review of grammar rules and sentence structure is needed to improve accuracy and fluency.

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Band 5+: You recently missed a flight. You think this was the fault of the airlines. Write a letter to the airlines. In your letter - Explain why you believe the airlines was at fault - Describe the impact of this had on your journey - Say what you want the airlines to do.

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