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Band 4+: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he /she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college. - Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. - Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her.

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Dear Sir,

Hopes this e-mail finds you well. I am writing this letter for your situation.

To begin with , I am happy to advise you that why you are decide to starting on a job. As you know , Turkey have a rising unemployment rate . If you go to university , you will experience this problem . Most of friends can’t find a job because they graduated bachelor’s degree. It is a waste time . You are a 22 years old its advantage for you start your business life. You will buy a car, establish family or you will may be youth entrepreneur.I honestly believe it would be better to entrly corporate society.

According to , I suggest to you find the manuel dexterity skills requiring jobs . For instance, coiffeur ,repairman , gardener , etc. Also It is functional training . You should early attend you focus on your practical abilities.

I am looking forward to your response.

Best Regards

Nur

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task, but contains some irrelevant information and inaccuracies. The reasons for not enjoying college are not clearly stated, and the suggestions for jobs are quite general. To improve, focus on providing specific and relevant details directly related to the friend's situation and the task requirements. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but doesn't fully support the logical progression of your advice. To improve coherence, focus on using clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensuring that each sentence logically connects to the previous one. Using transition words and phrases can also help to guide the reader through your argument more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inappropriate ('entrly corporate society'). There's a need to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas effectively. For example, instead of 'starting on a job,' you could say 'entering the workforce.' To improve, try to learn synonyms for common words and phrases and focus on using vocabulary that is appropriate for the context of giving advice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('why you are decide to starting'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Review verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Practicing writing simple sentences and gradually increasing complexity can help improve accuracy.

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