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Band 5+: you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try get a job. you think he/she should get a job

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Dear Cathy

How are you ? Hope everything is fine . I received your but couldn’t reply soon as I was engaged in some important work.

Coming to the point , in my opinion it would be better for you to find a job of ur interest rather than wasting your time in studying, getting a degree and finally finding a job of your degree . I think you would not enjoy going to college since you are a passionate artist . Your are someone who spends most of your time in painting . By joining a college you might have to sacrifice your time spending on your passion . So try for a job and settle your life as early as possible . This gives you enough income to live and also more time to spend on your passion .

I think part time jobs will be better for you, like barista, receptionist , cashier and so on . Think about it thourougly and decide . Take care and let’s catch up soon .

Lovingly

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing advice, but could benefit from a more structured approach and clearer justification for the recommendation.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and smoother transitions between ideas. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

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