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Band 4+: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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hi xyz,

I have received your letter recently and discovered you are in a confusion. I will be glad helping you with this. hope you and your family having a good health.

In today’s era,college just serves a theoretical knowledge and costs many years of study. as you are already an adventure lover, going to college will make you feel restricted and burdened.

If you will have a work paying you handsome amount,you can do better in your life.As money is the only source which supports extravagant dreams.moreover ,you did not have to wait long to achieve a lifestyle you desire.

I know you are having a good experience of mountain climbing and trekking with a high proficiency in French. you can apply for a full-time tour guide in travelling companies. As I think turning your passion in to your career will bring best out of you.

I will be happy and proud to see you fulfling your goals. so thank me later for this advice.

best wishes

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining why going to college may not be enjoyable and suggesting getting a job instead. However, more detailed reasons could be provided for each point to fully address the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, but there are some minor issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Consider organizing the content more effectively to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some phrases could be more varied and sophisticated. Try to incorporate more diverse and precise vocabulary to improve lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in punctuation and sentence structure. Review the use of commas and work on sentence complexity for better accuracy.

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