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Band 5+: You recently visited a local sports center and found there were some problems with the facilities. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: Describe the problems you encountered. Explain how these problems affected your visit. Suggest what the manager should do to improve the facilities.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and high spirits.Actually, I visited your sports centre last week and I witnessed some issues that I want you to take into consideration.

Firstly, air conditioners for indoor games were not working properly. As you know, it is too hot outside and even while playing games people feel hot. As a consequence, it was hard for me and others to concentrate on games properly.

Secondly, I have also played bowling in sport centre where shoes for playing it ,were not only limited but also had unpleasant odour. This made me to wait long enough. Overall, I can say that it was terrible experience for me.

To improve these facilities, different games should have different staff to take care of all things. There should be regular checkups on electric equipments as well as shoes should be cleaned every week to prevent it from odour.

Hope that you will take some initiatives as soon as possible.

Your sincerely ,

Simran

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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should: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the problems, their impact, and suggestions for improvement.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

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Lexical Resource

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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