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Band 4+: you saw an advertisement for a tennis course in england but you have one or two problems and cant stay the whole coures. write a letter to the coures director.in your letter. .explain your interest in the coures. .describe your problem. .find out if a refund is possible.

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Dear john,

I hope you are doing well i am written this latter to telling about the something my tennis coures i am intersted in this coures and really enjoy the tennis.

But i am not stay the long time in england for the whole coures complete of tennis becaues some problems for me. i am stay in the expensive rent flat for the whole of 1 week. but i decided to change my flat becaues this is very expensive for me and many problems in flat forexample water leakage, gas issue, sometime light problem.many time i complain my flat owner but he is no coperative for me.

Me saying the owner retun my pay and i am gonig to see my new flat to my affortable range this flat is small but that is enaff for me this flat 2 room and one kitchen that is good for me.and i am decided to shift in flat because my advertisement of tennis coures and i stay long time and compelete my whole course.

best wishe,

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Overall Band Score

4
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
coures: 4
tennis: 3
whole: 3
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Task Response

4
The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant details and struggles with clarity. The explanation of interest in the course is weak, and the description of the problem is overshadowed by excessive detail about the flat. The request for a refund is implied but not clearly stated. To improve, focus on directly addressing each point in the task with clear and concise language. Prioritize the tennis course and your inability to complete it, and keep the details about the flat brief and relevant to your reason for leaving the course early.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the writer's thoughts. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. The transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the overall flow is disjointed. To improve coherence, focus on logically structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing each point in the task, and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices like transition words and phrases to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, lacking the range needed to express ideas clearly and precisely. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise language. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider variety of vocabulary related to the topic. Focus on learning and using more specific and descriptive words to convey your meaning effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, hindering comprehension. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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