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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts the "Percentage of total music sales by method" from 2011 to 2018, with the following data points: Streams: 2011 (5%), 2012 (7%), 2013 (12%), 2014 (20%), 2015 (25%), 2016 (30%), 2017 (40%), 2018 (50%). Downloads: 2011 (35%), 2012 (38%), 2013 (43%), 2014 (45%), 2015 (40%), 2016 (35%), 2017 (30%), 2018 (25%). CDs purchased: 2011 (55%), 2012 (48%), 2013 (38%), 2014 (30%), 2015 (28%), 2016 (25%), 2017 (20%), 2018 (15%).

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The data presents proportion of the method used by citizens to consumed music between 2011 and 2018.

Notably, streams became a dominant method through the period surpassing the other two options. Downloads and CDs purchased displays a significant decline in the past 7 years, while streams experienced substantial growth.

In 2011 streams method shares only 5%, after years it slowly rising and achieve a peak number of shares in 2018, which is 45%. Conversely, in 2011 CDs able to rules the market with 55%. But due to globalitation, people begin to not used CDs anymore for listened musics and continue to downfall until 2018 with shares only 25%. On the other hand, downloads method start with a pretty high share, which is 35%. It increase until 2015 with 45%, due to how convenient it is for listened musics. However, from 2014-2018, this method began to decline with 30% in 2018, because of other competitors started to inovate more.

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method: 5

streams: 3

other: 3

shares: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The report accurately identifies the main trends in music consumption. Minor inaccuracies in data points are present, but the overall summary is strong and addresses the task fully.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's structure is generally clear, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences lack smooth transitions, impacting the overall coherence.

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5.5

A good range of vocabulary is used, although some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally appropriate for the task.

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Numerous grammatical errors affect the clarity and fluency of the report. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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