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Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image comprises a graph labeled "Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 38" with the X-axis marked "Time" from "6:00" to "22:00" at 2-hour intervals, and the Y-axis labeled "Number of People" ranging from 0 to 500 at 100-unit intervals. The line graph displays data points at each time interval with associated values: 6:00 (100), 8:00 (400), 10:00 (300), 12:00 (100), 14:00 (400), 16:00 (200), 18:00 (500), 20:00 (100), 22:00 (300). The points are connected to form a zigzag pattern with peaks at 8:00, 14:00, and 18:00, and troughs at 6:00, 12:00, 16:00, and 20:00.

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The line graph shows information about the number of passengers using a Paris Metro station over the course of the day.

Overall, passengers figures fluctuated significantly throughout the day, with a distinct peaks during the morning and early evening, while the lowest figures were recorded in the mid-afternoon.

In the early morning around 6:00 the number of passengers began at 100 people before rising sharply and reached its peak to approximately 400 by 8:00 in the morning. This was followed by a noticeable fall to 200 passengers within a two-hour time span. During late morning around to early afternoon, the volume of passengers rose gradually and remain stable at 300 between 12:00 and 14:00.

During the Afternoon hours, usage fell sharply and reached its lowest point at roughly 100 at 16:00. Thereafter, it eventually rose sharply and reached another peak at around 400 by 18:00. By the end of the period, the figure fell significantly to roughly 100 passengers at 22:00

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

passengers: 6

morning: 4

early: 3

around: 3

sharply: 3

reached: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the graph and provides a reasonable overview of the passenger numbers throughout the day. The description of the trends is generally clear, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and avoid minor inaccuracies. Also, ensure that the structure is logical and that the language is accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overall trends and specific data points are presented in a logical sequence. However, transitions between some sentences and paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. For example, in the third paragraph, the transition from the morning peak to the afternoon dip could be more clearly linked.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends in a graph. Terms like 'fluctuated significantly,' 'distinct peaks,' and 'lowest figures' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied synonyms and precise language to describe the changes and quantities. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'rose sharply' or 'fell significantly,' try alternatives like 'increased dramatically,' 'declined substantially,' or 'plummeted.' Also, be careful about using the word 'roughly' too often.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. However, there are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, 'with a distinct peaks' should be 'with distinct peaks,' and 'remain stable at 300 between 12:00 and 14:00' should be 'remained stable at 300 between 12:00 and 14:00.' Proofreading carefully for subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage can further improve the grammatical accuracy.

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