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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Javeriya,

It’s been a long time since we saw each other, in your recent letter you mentioned that you are facing an issues adjusting in your new school and you are asking me that how to fit in?.

It would be great if you speak less and listen more to your mates, this is the best way to judge a person’s personality, spend your time with those who you find mind-likely, try to sit with the person you like the most.

However you can also join clubs as you were in dramatic society in your previous school and try to take part in school activities, in this way you can interact with your seniors and juniors also.

A piece of advice from my side is everything takes time, do not loose your patience in hurry, ultimately you are going to fit in and will make a bunch of friends.

If you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as soon as you can. Hope to see you soon, take care.

Yours sincerely,

Nameerah.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing relevant suggestions and advice.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, affecting the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely accurate or appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which impact the overall clarity and accuracy of the message.

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