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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear sir,

My name is Jashan. I recently shifted to this city from India.

I am a student. In my college, I heard a lot about your sports club. Since I have to handle my studies and all the household chores by myself, I have not gotten the chance to take care of my health. I think joining this sports club is a good idea. Also, I can make friends there. I heard that most of the youngsters have the membership.

Before becoming a member of your club, I have some questions for you. What is the membership cost? And what facilities you will provide?

Your sincerely,

Jashan

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and expansion on the reasons for wanting to join and the questions asked would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is easy to follow, but some improvements in the flow and paragraphing would enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the grammar is mostly understandable, some errors affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score.

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