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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a hospital now and future plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains two diagrams for 'NEW STREET HOSPITAL' labeled 'NOW' and 'FUTURE PLANS'. The 'NOW' plan includes a 'Car Park' in the southwest, an 'Accident and Emergency' building south of the central 'Main Hospital Building', and 'Offices' in the northeast, with a road entering from the north and forking. The 'FUTURE PLANS' diagram shows a 'Car Park' in the southwest, a 'Café' south of the central 'Main Hospital Building', and a 'Fitness Centre' in the northeast, with a road network that loops around the site. Both diagrams feature a compass rose.

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The pictures illustrate a hospital in the present and upcoming plans. Overall, the hospital is going to be changed remarkably such as some places will be removed or will be built as well as renovated.

Firstly, the Main Hospital Building is going to be persisted in being with same position and identical largeness. And then the Offices is going to be replaced by fitness centre. Furthermore, Accident and Emergency will be removed and the Café going to be built which idea place people come here take picture, have meeting with friends or run deadlines.

Secondly, Car park is going to be expanded compared to the old before to be able contain many people’s cars. The street will be broaden and more ways than, travel have difference direction to go avoid traffic jams and clear walkway.

In conclusion. The maps is decorated the different between in the present and upcoming plans. Main Hospital Building have unchanged but the places are Offices, Accident and Emergency around will be changed become Fitness Centre, Cafe include the street also expand for convenience of travel.

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hospital: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes between the current hospital layout and the future plans, such as the replacement of the offices and the accident and emergency department. However, the response lacks precision in several areas. Some descriptions are speculative or irrelevant to a formal report (e.g., mentioning people taking pictures or meeting friends in the café). Additionally, the overview and conclusion are somewhat repetitive and contain grammatical inaccuracies that occasionally obscure the intended meaning. To improve, focus on using more formal, objective language and ensure that comparisons are made clearly and concisely without adding personal interpretations of how the facilities will be used.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. While you attempt to use cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'In conclusion', they do not always function effectively because the sentences themselves are difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using logical transitions that connect the changes (e.g., 'In contrast to the current layout, the future plan features...') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often inaccurate. For example, phrases like 'persisted in being with same position', 'identical largeness', and 'decorated the different' are not natural English expressions. In Task 1, you should use specific verbs for map changes, such as 'relocated', 'expanded', 'converted', 'demolished', or 'constructed'. Avoid using informal or irrelevant descriptions, such as mentioning people taking pictures or meeting friends, as the report should remain objective and focused strictly on the physical changes shown in the diagrams.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report that occasionally impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The maps is', 'Offices is'), incorrect tense usage, and poor sentence structure (e.g., 'The street will be broaden and more ways than'). To improve, practice using the passive voice, which is essential for describing changes in maps (e.g., 'The offices will be replaced by a fitness centre'). Work on sentence complexity by using subordinating conjunctions to combine ideas more smoothly.

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