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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the changes in the percentage of lawyers choosing jobs in different industries in a specific country from 2001 to 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a table comparing percentages of males and females in four categories across two years, 2001 and 2016. For 2001, Private Lawyer: Male 15%, Female 17%; Business: Male 14%, Female 14%; Government: Male 45%, Female 41%; Others: Male 26%, Female 28%. For 2016, Private Lawyer: Male 19%, Female 21%; Business: Male 14%, Female 21%; Government: Male 38%, Female 42%; Others: Male 29%, Female 16%.

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The table below show the changes in the percentage The way people choose their careers has changed since 2001 to 20016.

Overall, Male; Governments was in the first stage with 45% and Female was with 41% in 2001. By looking future we can see in 2016 the results was awful. The result of Female shocked many people just because the percentage was 42% that were where incredibly. In that time Male was less than Female with 38% percentage.

On the one hand private lawyers was with very small result in both male and female 15/17%. As well after 15 years they could changed a bit for 19/21%. And Others was in a middle line in 2001 26% 28% in 2016 29%.

On the other hand Business reporting in 2001 was very similar results between male and female by the reason 14% / 14% . But after some ears even though could not changed for male as results in 2016 was 14 % male 21% female.

In conclusion Government was in the first stage by the golden results. Also with male and female percentage

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female: 6

results: 4

percentage: 3

changed: 3

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The report generally addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization is present but could be improved for better flow. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing specific comparisons, and ensuring clarity in your descriptions. Also, avoid emotional language and maintain a neutral tone.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct ideas. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak or missing, hindering the overall readability. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific trend or comparison, and a concise conclusion. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure a smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of appropriate vocabulary to describe the trends and changes in percentages. Some word choices are vague or inaccurate, affecting the clarity of the report. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, changes, and comparisons. Use synonyms and more specific terms to describe the data accurately and effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding and detract from the overall quality of the writing. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Practice writing regularly and seek feedback to identify areas for improvement.

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