Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the reasons for moving to the capital city. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The time frame is incorrectly stated as '2000 and 2025' instead of 2000 to 2015. The data for employment is misreported (e.g., '0.9 million' in 2010, but the visual description indicates 90,000, which is correct, but the report says 'dropped sharply in the final year' without specifying the exact value, and the study figures are not accurately presented (e.g., '0.45 million' in 2005 is correct, but '0.9 million' in 2015 is correct, yet the report does not mention the initial value). The report also omits specific data for family/friends and adventure, and the statement about adventure 'keeps steady at 0.1 million' is inaccurate as it increases over time. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, correct the time frame, and provide more precise comparisons and figures for all categories. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and two body paragraphs, and the information is presented in a logical order. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'AIM addition' instead of 'In addition', and 'the figure did not differ significantly' without specifying which figures). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, which affects the overall coherence. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and phrases accurately, and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea with smooth transitions between sentences.

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic (e.g., 'relocated', 'urban area', 'motivations'), and attempts to vary word choice. However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward expressions (e.g., 'the outcome of a research', 'individuals relocated to the urban area of a certain nation', 'the most important purpose why people leave from their hometown', 'AIM addition'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some phrases are repetitive (e.g., 'the figure'). To improve, use more precise and natural collocations, and avoid direct translation or informal phrasing. Also, ensure that terms like 'figure' and 'number' are used correctly and consistently.

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, including some complex sentences (e.g., 'the number of people relocating for schooling increased dramatically reaching 0.45 million in 2005 and 0.9 million in 2015'). However, there are noticeable grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity (e.g., 'individuals relocated to the urban area of a certain nation between 2000 and 2025' - the time frame is incorrect; 'before dropped sharply' - missing subject; 'keeps steady' - tense inconsistency). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper connectors. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and sentence structure. Proofreading for common errors would also help.