Band 7: You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ......................., (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Dr. Hardy,

I am writing to request a re-arangement of my current role in the company. First, I would like to express my gratitude and appreciation for the things I have leaned in this department and the memorable moments I had with my friendly colleagues. Having worked as a scientific writer in the research institute, I boost not only my writing skills, but also my comprehension of the scientific articles.

I have received several feedback from our data analyst regarding their difficulties in designing an analysis for a project. They are concerned about peaking out wrong variables in each project since they do not have clinical perspective. Therefore, if I relocate to the analysis department, I will be able to assist them in their medical issues. Moreover, I will master new skills that would be beneficial for our ongoing studies. I highly think this collaboration will enhance our precision and productivity.

In addition, I would like to send my respect and thanks because of the conveniet workplace and all incentives we receive, which increase our motivational. For this reason, I wanted to present my assurance in my tendency to stay in the company. I hope to work here for a long time. I look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Yeganeh Karimi

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