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Band 4+: You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Hi Raman,

i hope you doing well,my reason is to write this letter to you because by ,mistake carried you i pad with me.

firstly i really wanna thank to you for arranging the wonderful weekend for me.I was so tired after all the examination last week and mind also want some rest but after sending time with you and your mother now am feeling so fresh and energetic. Along with this i also say thank you to your mom for cooking the delicious food for me.

Am so sorry for carrying your object with me. Actully i was in so much hurry while leaving your house i even i noted that it was your Ipad because both of us Ipad are almost same,but i notied that thing when i reached home and turn this on. but do not worry that am sending my dad to your home he will drop that in evening to your house. once again i apolozie for my mistake.

best regards

Gursharn

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear explanation of the situation. The tone is appropriate for a friendly letter. To improve, pay closer attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance clarity. For example, some sentences are a bit awkward and could be phrased more naturally.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, you could start the second paragraph with 'Firstly,' or 'Regarding my stay,' to clearly introduce the topic. In the third paragraph, you could use phrases like 'Unfortunately,' or 'Due to a misunderstanding,' to smoothly transition into explaining the mistake.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words to make your writing more engaging. For instance, instead of just saying 'delicious food,' you could describe the specific dishes or flavors that you enjoyed. Also, be mindful of spelling errors, such as 'apolozie,' as they can detract from the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct usage of articles and prepositions. For example, the sentence 'i hope you doing well' should be 'I hope you are doing well.' Similarly, 'by ,mistake carried you i pad with me' should be rephrased for better clarity. Proofreading carefully before submitting your writing can help catch these errors.

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