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Band 7+: You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

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Dear Arshika

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to inform you that I brought your game Dvd along with me unintentionally.

Indeed we had a great time at your place during my visit last month. We made numerous memories together in terms of visiting new places, museums and trying vivid cuisines. Moreover our visit to lake and doing camping will always be remembered.

If you remember, I bring game Dvd too for adding more fun to my stay and got surprised after watching your collection.

While packing my stuff, I picked one of your game as well, which I know you play every weekend. I apologize for that, nevertheless it was not done deliberately.

I have a meeting in your town next Monday hence I am planning to visit and return it to you.

If you have some other plans please feel free to let me know then I will send it by post.

Take care of yourself

Best regards

Deepika

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-written and clearly addresses all three bullet points in a natural and coherent manner. There are no omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and each paragraph addresses a specific point outlined in the task. However, transitions between some ideas could be smoother to enhance the overall flow. For example, the transition from describing the enjoyable stay to explaining about the DVD could be more seamless.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words like 'unintentionally,' 'numerous,' 'vivid,' and 'deliberately.' However, some phrases could be more natural and sophisticated. For instance, instead of 'bring game Dvd too for adding more fun,' consider something like 'brought a game DVD along to enhance the fun.' Overall, the vocabulary is adequate but could be refined for greater impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'I bring game Dvd too' should be 'I brought a game DVD too.' Also, 'got surprised after watching your collection' could be improved to 'was surprised by your collection.' Correcting these minor errors and refining sentence structures would enhance the grammatical accuracy and overall quality of the letter.

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