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Letter

Band 4+: you want to apply for the following job .write a letter to MR. Murray describe your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mr Murray,

I am writing this letter to highlight my key skills as a waitress having 2 years of experience in same field makes me a good fit for this job that helps me to show my personal attributes and work ethics.

Moreover , being a waitress requires a good professional behavior and ability to tackle challenges with providing the best service and satisfaction to the guests that reflects well from my way of working.

Explaining my previous job duties , maintaining a good coordination with team members and providing best service to the guest while being hectic makes you a perfect guider .Adding to this , time to time service and taking care of Sanitation or hygiene is the main part of being a good worker working with a smile and having a positive attitude makes me a perfect person for this role.

Looking forward to hearing from you and hoping so you won’t select the best team member.Best regards ,

Surbhi

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

makes: 3

being: 3

service: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task by describing the applicant's previous experience and explaining why they would be suitable for the job. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the job requirements mentioned in the prompt.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with organization and clarity. Consider restructuring the content to improve the flow and logical progression of ideas. Additionally, using transition words and phrases can enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases are repetitive or not the most suitable choices. Try to incorporate more varied and precise vocabulary to demonstrate a higher level of lexical resource. Additionally, pay attention to word forms and collocations for better accuracy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, there are errors in punctuation, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading for grammatical accuracy is essential to improve the overall quality of writing.

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