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Band 4+: You want to complain about the service that you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting. Write a letter to the person who organized the meeting. In the letter Describe the meeting Explain the problems with the service Suggest what the meeting organizer should do.

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Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem I encountered with the service of hotel where you organised my meeting.

The meeting was in Rose gold hotel which is located in jalandhar City. The meeting was held on 6th August at 10:00 am. However, the hotel was beautiful but unfortunately when we went their the hotel was closed. So, we need to wait for two years.

Firstly, the staff did not welcome us properly. Secondly, the food was not delicious as I am expecting. It tasted like a staple food. Thirdly, the hotel was very crowded as result we are unable to focus on our meeting.

So, I want to reschedule the meeting. I hope this time you will organised it at better hotel otherwise, I want my refund if you are not able to do this.

Your’s sincerely

Rajpreet

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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hotel: 6

meeting: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the details about the meeting and the problem are not fully developed. The suggestion for a refund is a bit strong and could be softened. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The organization of ideas could be improved, and some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are some instances of inaccurate or less precise word choices. The letter could benefit from a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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