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Band 4+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Mithussan. I am writing this is letter, join yor a new gym, So telling somone friend’s this gym good menisenary and gym very clening, like.

Telling which of, types of membership and now available, and your package’s prices available. I want to one monthly ,or six month packages. I think six monthly pages. And any more offer’s.

Because. now me 78kg. So me weight loss 13kg . I want to gym coach, daliy training Morning 2h and Evening 2h. But gym coach monthly payment. And how to pay say somthing me. And My many friend’s alredy joint your gym so that boys recomenting your gym.

I hope you me situation. I am waiting for your responseply to me.

With faithifuly

Mugamathu Sunel Sing

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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monthly: 3

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The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. More precise questions and a clearer structure would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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4.5

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4.5

The vocabulary used is basic and contains some inaccuracies. Expanding vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Significant improvement in grammar is needed.

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