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Band 5+: you want to sell your television you think your friend might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend, in your letter state no1 explain why you are selling describe the television suggest a date your friend can come and see it

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Dear Arjun

I believe your doing good. I have a great news for you.

As you remember, last time when we have a short discussion you told me that, you’re looking to buy a new OR used TV. Actually, we are planning to sell your TV as you know its from last 3 years but nowadays, everyone busy in using mobile phones and we are not using from last month.

In addition, its new LED TV with smart features along with all apps likes, Netflix and YouTube. So, we make a discussion about price should not too high, it’s just for ($200) which will be every convenient for you.

Is your free on next weekend? So that you come to have a look before making any decision for buying it. If you need any help, I am available for you anytime.

That’s all for news. I am waiting for your response.

Best wishes

Jot

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing reasons for selling, specifications, price, and an invitation. There are a few minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings, but they do not significantly detract from the overall message. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and word choice for greater clarity and fluency.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between your reasons for selling, the TV's specifications, and the invitation. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct topics. For example, the details about the TV could form its own paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally simple and functional, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and descriptive words. For instance, instead of 'doing good,' you could say 'I hope you are well.' Using a wider range of vocabulary would make the letter more engaging and precise. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I believe your doing good' should be 'I hope you are doing well,' and 'we are planning to sell your TV' should be 'we are planning to sell our TV.' Addressing these errors will significantly improve the letter's readability.

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