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Band 5+: You want to take a language course in a foreign country and need information about the courses that are available. Write a letter to a language school, inquiring about the programmes they offer. In the letter introduce yourself and explain your language learning goals inquire about the duration, schedule, and cost of their courses ask about any additional services or facilities provided by the language school

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I hope you are doing well.

My name is Harpreet Singh and i am writing a letter to know about language course which you are offering. I am planing to move Australia in Next year. I decided to take classes to improve my english speaking skilles or academic as well.

Please provide me information regarding course. I also know about fee structure and total duration of course and schedule aswell. Please let me know if any evening classes is available.

I also like to know about which facilities you are offering for students like accommodation, air port Pickup service. Please inform me if any entrance exam before jioning the course. I like to enrole that course which mainly focus on academic and speaking.

I am waiting your valuable feedback and I hope join course as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Harpreet Singh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 6

about: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing the writer, explaining language learning goals, inquiring about course details, and asking about additional services. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and ensuring correct grammar and sentence structure. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing specific questions, and a concise conclusion. Using more explicit transition words and phrases would also enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey your message effectively. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to language learning and course inquiries. For example, instead of 'know about,' use 'inquire about' or 'seek information regarding.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and avoid run-on sentences.

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