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Band 4+: You were involved in a car accident, and your vehicle sustained significant damage. Write a letter to your car insurance company

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to report a recent unfortunate incident regarding my car. On 5 December 2024,my car was accidented,resulting in the damage of several part. Its lamp was decay and door was so mess. The phenonem occurred during the evening when I and my sister were went to the supermarket in my car. one car did not stop when it was green light i drove but he did not want stop. As a result, he caused damage my car. Therefore,I would like to request your prompt assistance in processing a claim for the damage my vehicle. I have attached the police report and a details list of the damage items for your reference.

I looking forward from hearing you

Yours faithfully,

Mohira Valijonova

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by reporting the accident and requesting a claim. However, more detail on the accident and the extent of the damage would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but more precise and varied language would improve the overall quality. Some word choices are inaccurate or inappropriate.

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