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Band 5+: You were unable to attend your friend's birthday party due to an unforeseen circumstance. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for your absence. You should include details about: - the reason you could not attend the party - how you feel about missing the event - how you plan to make it up to your friend.

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Dear Jason,

I hope you are doing well, I want to talk about your birthday event soon, one month ago you are actually told me about your birthday party, so I want to apologize before, because I have something privacy problems in my family, in that case maybe I will absence on your special event.

First of all I have important reason that make me could not attend the party soon, because I should care about my privacy problem right now, and because of this I was feel very sad and I think it everyday before I send you message seems right now.

I hope you understand about my problem too, and after that I assure you to trust me for another special time, I will make some plan that to make it up with you. You know I will give you a special gifts, and its will be suprising you soon.

Yours Faithfully,

Kishan Rajendra Putra

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 4

because: 3

special: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but some aspects could be more clearly explained and elaborated.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow and organization could be improved for better clarity and readability. Grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication and impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that hinder the overall clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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