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Band 5+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Andrew,

I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing to you to let you know that I would really like to work in your head office in another country for six months.

To start with, I want this job because it will help me grow, learn new skills and also gain experience that it will help me find a better job. I also would like to do challenging tasks so i will learn how to handle everything.

However, somebody needs to take my place for six months, but I will make a work plan that will instruct the person who will replace me. That will make the work easier. However, if they need additional help they can ask the other service colleagues.

I would appreciate if you will help me find someone to replace me and get the job in your head office. Thank you in advance!

Sincerly,

Smith Ana

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining the reasons for wanting to work in the head office for six months and asking for help in arranging it. However, the explanation of how the work could be done while the writer is away is not fully developed. It would be beneficial to provide more details on how the work could be managed in their absence.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The ideas are not consistently organized, and there are some abrupt shifts between topics. It would be helpful to use linking words and phrases to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but it lacks precision and sophistication. Additionally, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that affect the overall lexical resource. Using more varied and precise vocabulary with better control would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates some variety in sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout. Punctuation and sentence structure could be improved for better accuracy. It would be beneficial to review and revise the grammar for better accuracy and range.

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