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Band 9: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to follow up on my request to work abroad at headquarters for nearly half of the year. I am Helena Ghanbari, the Chief Executive Officer of our West Branch.

Firstly, this experience would not only be beneficial for my personal career, but it would also be highly advantageous for our company’s progress. Working with multicultural colleagues will broaden my horizons and open up numerous opportunities for the development of our business. If given this opportunity, I am confident that I will achieve significant results.

Secondly, you need not worry about my current position at work; I am fully capable of managing all my responsibilities and projects remotely. I will maintain regular communication with my team through email, and as you know, we conduct all of our meetings online. Additionally, I will keep you updated and inform you of any pertinent changes through the platform of your choice.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could facilitate this opportunity for me by reaching out to our USA team and assisting me in completing the necessary arrangements.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to your response.

Sincerely,

Helena Ghanbari

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Overall Band Score

9

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Task Response

9

All parts of the task are successfully addressed. The letter is well-organized and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter flows smoothly and logically. The use of cohesive devices is seamless and sophisticated.

Lexical Resource

9

A wide range of sophisticated vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with complete accuracy and fluency.

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