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Band 4+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Subject : permission to work in the company’s head Office in Paris

Mr John,

I’m writing to you this letter to ask for your permission, if that’s possible of course to spend the next 6 months in our head office in Paris.

In fact and as you know I’m studing for my master’s degree and the next semester will be my last one.My thesis subject is :the effect of studies abroad on youth. So, writing my thesis based on personal experience would be very effective for me.

I promise that my studies won’t affect my work in any possible way.In fact,I’ll keep my same enthousiasm and seriousness while trying to perform my best at work.

I would be really thankful if you accept my demand and I could really use your help.

I’ll be waiting for your response , sir.

yours sincerely,

Word Count: 142

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the explanation for wanting to work in Paris is not fully convincing. The focus on the thesis is not directly related to the company's head office. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the transitions between ideas are not smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some instances of less precise word choices and a limited range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the message.

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