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Band 6+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Philip,

The purpose of this letter is to show my interest in working for half a year in the company’s head office.

Firstly, I would like to mention that I have developed efficiently my skills . Additionally, I have performed accurately at my role that I have been doing for the past few years. Consequently, I would like to learn about other area in the company and add to my skills and I would appreciate the opportunity to be involved in new challenges.

If that could be possible, I would like to rain my assistant. She could develop the tasks hat I have been doing as well.Moreover I can confide in her .She can do well in the tasks and can reach out to me if my help is required as regards to my job. She has a wide range of knowledge.

I would sincerely appreciate, if you could have the possibility to arrange the oversea transference to the head office in the company.Thanks for you prompt response I look forward to hearing from you soon .

Yours Sincerely,

James Favour

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 5

could: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task. The reasons for wanting to work in the head office are clearly stated, and the letter outlines how the work could be managed in the writer's absence. The request for help in arranging the transfer is also clear.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with the flow of ideas. The use of paragraphs could be improved to enhance the clarity and cohesion of the message.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains some grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. The use of tenses and articles could be improved.

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