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Band 6+: You would like to propose yourself as a speaker for an upcoming conference. Write an email to the conference organizing committee. Introduce yourself and your area of expertise, explain what value you could offer attendees, and request the opportunity to submit a full proposal.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this to pitch myself as a speaker for the upcoming conference on “Today’s World of AI”.

I work as a Director for A&Z Corporation and my major expertise is into Artificial Intelligence. I am leading multiple projects related to AI. For example, recently, me and my team successfully delivered an AI implementation that would benefit a lot people using banking transactions extensively. It was highly appreciated and recognized by the CEO of the firm.

I believe that my background in AI would allow me to deliver a high level walkthrough to the audience. I can very well convince people that how AI has transformed every sector and how they can adopt and leverage it for different purpose.

I have brainstormed few ideas that I would like speak to on. Hence, I would like the committee to grant me an opportunity to submit a complete proposal. I ensure you to submit the details before the deadline so that the committee can take a look and finalize. Thank You for hearing to my request. I hope for a positive response.

Sincerely,

Smruti Bhagat

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

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Task Response

The letter fully addresses the task by introducing the writer and their expertise, explaining the value they can offer to attendees, and requesting the opportunity to submit a full proposal. The content is relevant and covers all requirements appropriately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, some ideas are not fully developed, and the flow is occasionally disrupted by awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I have brainstormed few ideas that I would like speak to on'). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good use of topic-specific terms (e.g., 'Artificial Intelligence', 'AI implementation'). However, there are instances of informal or imprecise word choices (e.g., 'pitch myself', 'a lot people', 'different purpose'). A wider range of precise and formal vocabulary would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity, such as 'me and my team successfully delivered', 'that would benefit a lot people', 'I can very well convince people that how AI has transformed', and 'I ensure you to submit'. Punctuation is mostly correct, but sentence structures are often repetitive. More variety and accuracy in grammar are needed.

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Band 6+: You would like to propose yourself as a speaker for an upcoming conference. Write an email to the conference organizing committee. Introduce yourself and your area of expertise, explain what value you could offer attendees, and request the opportunity to submit a full proposal.

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